Nobody snatches up a novel after work hoping to be immediately transported back to the worst parts of the day they’ve just been paid to live through. A reader ends up in Cube Farm Purgatory in any workplace scene that amounts to colleagues, bosses and rivals gnashing through their professional relationships, pushing paper, attending meetings,… Continue reading LexIcon: Cube Farm Purgatory
I beat the same lessons into new writers over and over and over again.
Bouncing occurs when some small detail within your manuscript causes the reader to pause and consider whether they believe your facts, agree with your narrator’s opinions or otherwise buy into the assertions or events in the text. Rather than being swept along by suspense or the power of your writing, their attention has shifted. They… Continue reading LexIcon – Bouncing out of a manuscript